The Crescent Strikes by Dean Warren

WarrenTheCrescentStrikesWhere I Got It: Review copy

Narrator: David Dietz

Publisher: Dean Warren (2014)

Length: 10 hours 32 minutes

Series: Book 2 The Pacification of Earth

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This book picks up a littler over a year after Book 1 ended. Benjamin Bjorn is still a man of power and still married to an Achiever (Jenny) who got pregnant and had his child. While North America has settled somewhat into the new regime, rumblings are occurring across Europe – their Welfies want the same things. Also, the Middle East and Asian countries are wanting to expand their territories into Europe, needing more resources for their large populations. War is imminent.

Honestly, I was lukewarm on Book 1 and I am the same with Book 2. There’s still a good pacing, the story line having a nice mix of politics, action, some quiet contemplation, and sexytimes. I enjoyed the various betrayals as that mixed things up a little. Bjorn is no longer the underdog but he still champions them.

Again, the plot lines were pretty predictable. I never worried that our heroes would be killed or that the bad guys would get away unscathed in some manner. We did have several more cultures involved in this book (which I liked) but their portrayals in the book relied heavily on dated cultural stereotypes (which made things predictable and a little boring).

There were some additional ladies in this book and we even had a female Prime Minister for the UK. However, nearly all the plot decisions were made by men and most of the women were incompetent. Contraception, or rather, the lack of it, came up several times throughout the book. The responsibility to hold off on reproducing was always laid at the woman’s feet. This struck me as an oddity for this story: The world as a whole is over populated; there are several types of contraception available to both men and women today; this is set in the near future where there would be more types of contraception available if anything. So I didn’t get why our hero Bjorn was putting all the blame on Jenny and none of the responsibility on his own shoulders. It was a recurring theme throughout the book and it struck me as a dated idea. Perhaps even a sexist one.

One of our female characters does get to carry the day at the end, which was nice. However, it felt more like an apology for making the ladies so inconsequential for 1.8 books. I still liked Uncle Will, though we saw less of him in this book. There were a handful of other characters that had their moments. Over all, it was a little more disappointing than Book 1, American Revolt.

I received this audiobook at no charge from the narrator in exchange for an honest review.

The Narration: David Dietz did a fine job with this book. It called for plenty of accents, had a sizable cast of characters, and required emotion from time to time. He did a really good job with all the various accents. He also had distinct character voices for all the different characters.

What I Liked: Underdog hero leading the way; good pacing; plenty of cultures.

What I Disliked: The plot lines are mostly predictable; the ladies are mostly vapid things; responsibility of contraception placed on the women alone; relies heavily on dated cultural stereotypes.

Guest Post: Sex! Perversion! Nudity!

JameDiBiasioAuthorPicFolks, please welcome Jame DiBiasio back today. If you have been around this week, you know I reviewed his debut novel, Gaijin Cowgirl. Jame was cool enough to provide us with some entertainment for today’s guest post. If you haven’t heard of Gaijin Cowgirl yet, let Jame give a tantalizing view of what his novel entails.

Sex! Perversion! Nudity!

Gaijin Cowgirl somehow lives, secretes, oozes sex – hostesses, prostitutes, lovers, S&M, cruelty, erotica – without a sex scene.

The cover features a silhouetted female wearing boots and a cowboy hat (and nothing else). The first pages open with a moody bird’s eye view of Tokyo and zoom in on some dodgy businessmen entering a private club filled with clad and semi-clad hostesses – one of whom, American Val Benson, is our protagonist.

Her top client pays his favorite girls to paint them in the nude. And he’s not interested in their elbows or knees. Val’s friend Suki got her start in life letting men molest her in crowded subway cars.

And so it goes. Until it stops.

DiBiasioGaijinCowgirlI’m not against sex scenes in fiction. Where would we be without Philip Roth and John Updike filling us in on the juicy bits? Writing a sex scene is not that far off from writing an action sequence. Both involve intensely physical, fleshy confrontations that can be rendered visually, emotionally, internally, in many styles.

For this novel, though, I made a deliberate decision not to do sex scenes. Context is important too, and in this context, I am a foreign male writing about Japan and Thailand – specifically about issues around prostitution, human trafficking, titillation, weirdness and even love.

To get around the obvious perception problem of a person like me writing about perversion in Asia required one big decision and one little decision.

The little one was that I did not want to drag down a novel laden with important themes to the level of a cheap thrill. There’s enough sex in the story already; I didn’t think it needed to be made explicit. Instead I focused the narrative on violence and action scenes.

The big decision was to portray the story and its themes from a female perspective. I could have told this story from a man’s point of view. That would have been easier and in some ways more fun. There would have been a much closer review of straying hands and other body parts. That’s how guys think.

Putting a woman at the center of action, though, made Gaijin Cowgirl a good novel. Once I had created the character of Val, I had to let her loose. She was definitely in charge. From there I saw the whole deal through her eyes, understood her motives from her first principles.

It allowed me as the (male) author the luxury of being risqué without turning the book into one of those cheesy exposés about white guys banging Asian babes. (Those are, unfortunately, a staple in many of the region’s remaining bookshops; avoid).

That’s important to me because, firstly, I don’t want to be cast as a pervy creep. I live in Asia and I want to portray things here as accurately and sympathetically as I can. I have tremendous respect for the region’s cultures, its histories, its people, so if I’m going to dive into the darker corners, my motives need to be defensible.

Secondly, I want my work to be liked by women as well as men, with the broadest appeal possible. Call me bourgeois, but I’d like to sell more copies of the book.

It’s not a guy’s fantasy tale, and it’s not a feminist manifesto. Gaijin Cowgirl, with its James Bond-like cover, is a thriller: fun, entertaining, maybe a bit of an eye-opener, and a little over the top. And definitely sexy!

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